DeviantART is counting down to its 100 millionth deviation! Join in on the fun and take a look back at some of the most noteworthy deviations we've seen along the way. The deviant who uploads the 100 millionth deviation could win a special prize, too. Hurry, we're going to hit the 100 million mark soon!














Critiques
Only one problem I have noticed (and I don't know why I didn't notice it before) but you have a strange tangent with the rear wing coming out of your girl's head. It also connects the head to the edge of your image which ends up leading the eye out of the frame. You don't want that from a composition standpoint.
I hate to suggest you re-render this, but if you have the original file, it might be worth it to just move that rear wing a bit back or something and make the composition stronger by doing so.
The lighting is beautiful, pose, expression, items -- everything fits well together. Overall, a stunning piece.
Previous PageNext PageThank you for your Critique
You are not logged in.